Had another couple of narrative ideas from watching the 'Oopsy Daisy' video (watch from 2.44 to 3.05)...what about the two of the guys walking together and the girl's walking past. Bernard points the girl out to Daniel but Dan starts talking to her and gets her number. Also, could have the three of them sitting on a bench, Bernard gets up and leaves and looks back at Daniel and the girl, and we focus on his face.

- Mel -