Narrative Ideas

We have been discussing narrative ideas for our video, because we have decided not to show the two artists as young boys. We think it would be better to show them older, to make the friendship of the two boys and the girl clearer to the audience. We would also like to show the girl seperately with the two boys.
Our ideas:
- Split Screen - 1. The girl is with the main artist, Daniel, then runs/walks out of shot and into the shot with Bernard. This shows that she has left one for the other. 2. The girl is with Daniel and Bernard, showing the three of them were friends, and then we move to split screen with her with Bernard in one shot and Daniel in the other. 3. The girl with the two boys, doing the same thing with both of them, eg. touching them in a similar way (see 'Knock You Down' 4.25)


- The three of them walking together, with Bernard behind. We see him over the shoulder of Daniel on the right hand side, smiling, then wipe past Daniel's head and his face has changed. (See Kano video 1.59-2.02). We could then go to an OTS shot from Bernards perspective and see the girl looking at him.

- Daniel looking through his phone, in his bedroom, at photos of the three of them together, of him and the girl together, and of him and Bernard together.
- Clips of the three of them together, or of her with the two of them seperately (see shot on the right - 'Knock You Down' 3.15)

- Mel, for the group -